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i see a girl 
bound to a tree
i see this girl
this girl is me
she looks for 
for something
for something it's true
a thing that knows
that knows, that sees
what it is, that's bugging me


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  • silverwhisper said on Nov 18, 2007....
    that's an awful lot of alienation from self, luci. ?

    ed
  • TinSoldier said on Nov 18, 2007....
    Sorry that I haven't been reading for awhile.

    I like this one. I can see it. It also has kind of a Stephen King feel to it if you know what I mean.
  • luci-fur said on Nov 22, 2007....
    yeah, i guess that's true ed. I did feel momentarily at a loss as to how to process those feelings. 

    stephen king, seriously? wow... 

    i'll try writing some more one of these days

    luci

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It is harder to share pain than it is joy. Sometime with the help of friends and family, we endure our pains. But sometimes we have to stand alone. But if you maintain a postive outlook and endure cheerfully, we will find more company along the way....

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Close your eyes
Under starlit skies...
I suppose, anyway, just quit looking at my coffee ... that'll get you into trouble and you don't want trouble....
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