• malissav said on Nov 19, 2007....

  Robin, (This is Malissa V. from work) when did you write this? I think this is amazing. I love how you begin and end your poem. The beginning line "Discovery is amazing" is bluntly simple but passionate at the same time. You end your piece with "The value of self is known", I feel that nothing in this world is more important than the value of self and you are right that through discovery of self and inner feelings you come upon a truth that begins to recoat you so that a new person comes out with more in depth patience, peace, and a calming harmony that did not exist before. I feel that through poetry people discover themselves. They write things that they never knew existed in them that touch so many people on different levels. My only piece of advice for you regarding this talent is for you to be as patient as possible with yourself. I unfortunately can't write poetry to save my life so my "poetry" consists of letters that I write to myself (haha).

• SEDLACER said on Nov 19, 2007....

  Malissa
  With your talent you should be able to write anything. I love the fact that you are compelled to write continually. There is a wealth of talent waiting to be discovered in your writings. Thanks for the comment, actually I wrote this poem yesterday evening. After writing to you, I was reminded of the importance of self discovery

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