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it's all ok
that's what they say
just don't look down
look up above
and hide the frown
that lives inside

i spoke to the frown today 
and the frown told me to go away
i expected that, the first time though
its been a while, and so
i made a date 
to speak to my mate
hoping she will show.

i won't call my friends tonight, because
i don't want to break this date
this date with my mate 
who lives inside
and tries to be my guide.
 



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  • silverwhisper said on Nov 08, 2007....
    i really like this one, luci, both as a composition as well as for what it says.

    ed
  • luci-fur said on Nov 08, 2007....
    thanks Ed. Luci

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Written and performed for the Trans Day of Remembrance....
I dedicate these words to poetzsoul, in hopes that her next 25 years are motivating....
The darker it gets, the closer I'll be....
I had to. It has been brought up too often for me to resist....

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