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looking down
to where her pain lies afraid
hands cradle and touch
and her heart gently
breathes in the solitary
oneness of an unlikely union
between herself and life.


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  • silverwhisper said on Nov 08, 2007....
    i'm not sure why but i had the inescapable sense you're speaking of sex in a relationship. is that weird?

    ed
  • luci-fur said on Nov 08, 2007....
    hmm...., well yanno? any way people interpret is ok with me. Because it is always about how people gleam meaning from something according to their perspectives etc. And i do see how it could be interpreted that way definately. And sex is a union of course between one thing and another.
    This was actually a reflection of embracing the pain i have - being at one with it instead of pushing it away (like i do in real life a lot) or allowing it to take over and control haphazardly (like sometimes i do in reaction to something triggering).

    This poem was about cradling the pain sort of and breathing in and out through the emotional pain and making it feel welcome and comfort, so it can heal. that type of thing.

    so it's a coming together of sorts, similar to sex.
    luci
  • silverwhisper said on Nov 09, 2007....
    you know, i like that. :>

    ed
  • luci-fur said on Nov 10, 2007....
    well i'm very glad to hear that. You are one of my very favourite peeps on here, ed :)

    luci
  • silverwhisper said on Nov 10, 2007....
    aw...

    [blushes]

    ed

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