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Sometimes, when you look at me, I know I am a good person.

Occasionally, when I see myself, time amazes me.

Last week, when you kissed me, I felt safe.

This morning I awoke to thunder like falling boulders.

The patter of rain calms my soul.

At times, I feel joy and wish I could capture it somehow.

Tonight, I watched you sleeping and loved you quietly.



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  • secretlife said on Jul 14, 2007....
    and see, then i read this poem and it's completely different feeling-wise from the last one...completely.
     
    i love the last line...i love the image of watching someone sleep....
  • schreist said on Jul 24, 2007....
    I'm so glad that my words touch you SL. It's a small pleasure to know that you read them.

    Cheers
    SFC
  • secretlife said on Nov 09, 2007....
    i miss you here.
    got to thinking today and wondering if you ever pubished any of your work......
    i hope things are well in your world.
  • tbs230 said on Nov 19, 2007....
    That was so beautiful. I love the imagery of thunder sounding like falling boulders. But then saying right after that the patter of rain calms you. I loved that.

    I also agree with SL, that last night is simply beautiful. I miss your poetry too.

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