'Twas drowned in wretched poison, the likes of which forsake
goodness, love, a smile, the dove, euphoria once 'spake.
As Eve was tempted by Angel downed, Adam repeated the mistake
the serpent slithers, cinders and splinters, he found him burning at the stake.
Akin to seraphim yet cast, below the boundaries high
a fallen angel knows what was, but lives beneath the sky.
Eternally an enemy to all who seek to fly
bereft of joy but steeped in woe without conviction 'nough to cry.
Oppressed, offended, oblique in worth, askew of proper form
as if to say the laws of man held sway 'pon once were wings, now shorn.
Comfort lies, its bound by fear, change would yield a glut of scorn
convinced its purpose fled with stature, silently he mourns.
Solace is some years away, "comrade" Death will chide
"come upon my gondola to cross to the other side".
"Why wait? I'll simply end it now, the river Styx is far too wide
overboard and overwhelmed, in these dark currents from life I'll hide".
I've drowned in wretched poison, with gills! Irony wins!
I breathe and respire, blood thick with ire, slave to all my sins.
Despite time's endless passage, the miasma never thins,
I stagger about in boundless limbo, my thread, Fate eagerly spins.
© 2007 Danj3ris
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Danj3ris posted on Jun 03, 2007
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Heartwalker said on Jun 03, 2007....
Wow, Danj3ris,This is great poetry ... This would put Milton to shame, well, looks like yoiu are very inspired, Liked it very much.Keep up the great work.:P -
Heartwalker said on Jun 03, 2007....
How come your blog is in blue and brown as against the regular black and white ?Hw -
doctordan said on Jun 03, 2007....
danj3ris............I sincerely apologize for breaking in here, but since sithborg disallowed me the opportunity to comment on his blog I have to find alternate ways. Since then copsunited also caved in. You see doctordan only goes after the bullies.
......................it is amazing how they enjoy to break down other soulcasters, but can't take it themselves!!!
IT IS TIME THAT THEY LEARN THAT THERE ARE SENSIBLE SOULCASTERS HERE WHO'S FEELINGS ARE DEEPLY HURT BY THERE HURTFUL (AND HATEFUL) REMARKS. THOSE ARE MY FRIENDS AND I FEEL THE PAIN WITH THEM.
Thank you
Doctordan
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darkpearl said on Jun 03, 2007....
Again, a thing of beauty. Are you as sad (unhappy) as your wonderful work? I hope not because you are truly talented and that is something to be happy about.Please, please, don't stop these posts, they make my day. -
cotteralladams3 said on Jun 06, 2007....
Not bad. Try shortening it. -
destinydiva said on Jun 13, 2007....
Fallen Angel....That was simply Beautiful.......... It touched my heart, I felt the emotion. When you find your purpose please share the formula ;-)
Destiny x
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