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                                                     here.am.i.
                                                    
                                                    i.am.here.
                         
                          in.way.of.change.that.which.is.far.will.present.near.
                                              
                                              here.am.i.i.am.here.
 
                                when.it.comes.it.will.rise.as.new.

                   lifting.your.soul.with.less.of.effort.all.we.never.knew.to.be.true.

                              the.smoke.will.fade.it.will.reach.its.demise.

                   it.takes.nothing.it.takes.everything.it.takes.a.willingness.to.try.

                moments.made.by.nature.of.fleet.count.the.seconds.passing.by.

                 each.day.lived.brings.us.closer.to.the.one.in.which.we.die.


no.reason.to.cry.all.signs.point.to.flight.

to.be.a.fool.is.to.bring.into.question.the.wonder.of.why.

darkness.will.come.in.the.search.for.light.

you.you.you.lend.me.your.might.

in.consumption.of.trust.is.lost.power.of.fright.

               upon.the.look.of.all.around.rests.the.soul.delayed.to.be.found.
                          running.hit.the.ground.
                                   the.beat.of.your.heart.makes.the.sweetest.sound.

                               
seek.the.bloom.understand.the.symmetry.succumb.to.the.allure.

                                                            volume.so.high.to.be.sure.of.that.which.leaves.you.wanting.more.


strip.me.down.for.a.peek.at.the.core.


                         focus.not.lost.when.the.sun.is.in.glow.

                 the.choice.i've.made.is.not.to.go.

     you.can.never.wander.if.you.follow.your.flow.


a.home.to.be.made.within.my.heart.
trust.you.expect.me.ending.lacks.sight.
thing.some.genuine.real.the.from.start.
take.the.time.to.become.one.
elements.plenty.waiting.to.be.done
indication.colored.yellow.of.what.is.to.come.
whose.appointment.made.to.become.moon.to.my.sun.


cease.desire.never.
hold.passion.in.hand.like.a.newly.cherished.treasure.
run.not.from.the.good.nor.from.the.bad.
kiss.off.those.you.once.had.
too.good.is.the.song.for.falsity.so.long
love.is.the.feeling.never.to.be.wrong.
weakness.nonexistent.in.a.life.lived.so.strong.



so...splendid....is.....the......song.


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  • moonriver said on Feb 27, 2007....
    deep words, can't say i grasp even a fraction of the whole meaning. just fleeting glimpses of the fluid core. eerie echoes of another poem...
  • meadowmusic said on Feb 27, 2007....
    dear sir,

    eerie echoes of another poem written by whom? 

    i appreciate your interest in my words...i think poetry is intended to possess a certain level of mystery..leaving its readers in a state of slight confusion and wonder.   and in my book, if good poetry, also leaving its readers feeling somewhat warm and comforted in the kind of way that is unexplainable.   i'm not even certain what's written above is poetry so much as it is my soul in rhyming form.  perhaps that is poetry. 

    regardless, to have you glimpse at the fluid core is nice.
  • moonriver said on Feb 27, 2007....
    moonriver confucius say: poetry exactly that -- soul speak in deep rhythm. other souls resonate if in similar state. eerie echoes of another poem... still to be written :-)

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