He was ....perfect. Dress, not rich.... not white trash, perfect. Haircut, not trendy, not snobby, not trashy, .... perfect. Facial hair... perfect. Shoes... perfect. Voice .. perfect. Attention,...perfect. Time to spend....,perfect. He was mythical. He was perfect. And he was mine.
NotANormie posted on Feb 18, 2007
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silverwhisper said on Feb 19, 2007....
the word "perfect" doesn't really constitute a description, notanormie. how is he perfect? what kind of hair, what kind of clothes, what kind of shoes, whose voice does his resemble? how tall is he? what kind of build? what about the stuff that actually matters, like what kind of person he is? what values are important to him? what interests does he have?
the word "perfect" should be avoided in written descriptions, b/c it doesn't tell the reader anything. for one person, perfect means hugh grant; for another, it means a professional wrestler.
what does perfect mean to you?
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NotANormie said on Mar 07, 2007....
You are of course right. It was just one of those nights.
Suzz
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