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my desire rises, tongues of flame licking at the air from a vast blaze. i reach for you and eagerly devour your sigh.
you turn to face me and i see that same lust darkening your own eyes. people speak of aphrodisiacs but if there is a better one than that look, i don't know it.
with an urgency i didn't know i felt, my mouth seeks your neck, nipping and licking as i descend lower to the rise of your breast. i love this spot and am gratified at how erect your nipple already is when i get there.
my hand however, feeling my need more urgently, has already reached down to that wonderful trimmed patch that always commands my attention, gently stroking at the wetness it finds there. as i do, your scent reaches me and i lose all control of myself.
quickly, i kiss my way lower until i can sample your honey for myself. my tongue parts your labia and stabs deep within you, drawing forth a cry. again and again i stab deep within you.
i pull your legs up so i can gaze upon the center of your desire freely. i marvel as always at the sight of you before descending upon that erect, exposed nub. my tongue is a club and i bludgeon you there in a frenzy, coating my face in your wetness.
the sound of your fingers clawing at the sheets makes me deliriously happy. i know and love that sound and what they mean. i look up and see that your own hands now are pinching and tugging at your two summits of lust.
inspired, i shift slightly so i can resume your tongue-lashing. your breathing is becoming more ragged--urgent.
i bear down. i know you're close--so close now...only a little while longer...
legs wrap around my head, drawing me closer. i cannot breathe and right now, i do not need to. i lap, prod and stab within your delta of venus.
your legs are trembling around me.
this is the moment i choose to ram four fingers deep within your too-long neglected lower mouth and the urgency of your need is made clear with the way you try to swallow them. you're so close now...
we've never tried this before but i need to--my hand is moving so freely within you. so i draw it out and slowly try to add the thumb this time. i try several times but it doesn't really quite fit.
when you fling tube of lube down to me, i seize it and generously lube my hand. you're so wet it seems unnecessary but i see you need to know as much as i do.
four fingers slip in easily, i draw them together and then...yes, that was it. the whole of my hand slowly slides within you.
we continue like that for a while--my tongue ravaging, my hand exploring. after several strokes, it becomes easier so that i can now try something we never thought possible.
first i withdraw, then ball up my hand and rotate it it until i find the right angle and slowly, fingers and knuckles fit past your outer lips, then inner lips as my fist descends into you. your legs around me are stiff, tense--i know you aren't sure whether this will hurt but i go gently.
i look up at you to see you looking down at me and your desire-darkened eyes rather than your voice demands, "yes...do it..."
my fist ravages you as my tongue whirls away at you. i am awash in your wetness, the scent of you all i can smell when your legs, still locked around me, draw me in again...
there is an explosion of color in my mind, which echoes furiously--until i realize it's the sound of both of our cries of release.
finis
silverwhisper posted on Feb 18, 2007
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quidnunc said on Feb 18, 2007....
you got me thirsty, ed. -
polarheart said on Feb 18, 2007....
Ed, does your wife get to read these writings of yours? Just curious. -
queenparanoia said on Feb 18, 2007....
damn ed... a whole fist!!!so sexy....oh crap i need to sleep now....three fingers is enough for me... -
lioneljay said on Feb 18, 2007....
This piece will come in handy when one is in need of extra stimulation. Well done, friend. -
Zayda said on Feb 18, 2007....
Silver--This is a terrific piece of writing. Well done. -
MissMimi said on Feb 18, 2007....
[fanning my face] Excuse me, I have to go do something. Right now. I'll be back to comment later. ;)
Exquisitely effective, Ed. This has been bookmarked. -
CreativeWoman said on Feb 18, 2007....
Absolutely sizzling, ed.
CW
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jen01 said on Feb 18, 2007....
excellent!!well,i this is my answer for my last posti did wish to call him but he refused it. he never wish me spent any dime on him. it sounds strange but he is. if i need anything, he just told me to make a miss call n he will call me back.. -
Lucytorial said on Feb 18, 2007....
I'm exhausted...need {{pant}} to {{pant}} catch my {{pant}} breath.
ED you truly have a gift for erotica.... very hot indeed
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midnightman said on Feb 18, 2007....
ed: don't know if my whole fist would fit up there....... don't know if my wife would let me try! Good writing!MM -
silverwhisper said on Feb 19, 2007....
quid: cool. :D
polarheart: nowhere near as often as i'd like.
queen: i suspect most women would have trouble with four fingers. :>
LJ, super z: my thanks, guys.
mimi: i'm flattered!
CW: thank you, my friend.
jen: thank you! i saw your response on that blog, thanks. :>
midnight man: o, at least in theory it'll fit--a baby's head is bigger than your fist, i wager. it just takes time, lube and a willingness to try.
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missunderstood1162 said on Feb 19, 2007....
Holy Moley Ed. Um.....If you saw the size of my husbands hands you would know why I just crossed my legs and winced. hahahahahahahaha. I can handle some of his fingers....but.......on the rest I don't know.but was it hot? totally. dripping hot.one thing you wrote that made me smile was:Your two summits of lustthat was great. -
polarheart said on Feb 19, 2007....
Well, Ed, I suspect that it either turns her on wildly or makes her blush ashamedly! -
Lucytorial said on Feb 19, 2007....
I would say both... I wish I was big enough down there for more than a cock! (no babies) a fist like miss said I'm crossing my legs...
I love your writting silver... I can smell it and taste it... for me these are very important. If i can smell a setting, a word, and then taste it in my mind it's good writting.
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redrocks said on Feb 20, 2007....
experienced it just once.. and it was really cool!!! -
silverwhisper said on Feb 20, 2007....
miss understood: thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it!
polarheart: well, it could also do both... :D
tobi-lee: thank you--i work sometimes w/ an editor who pointed out to me the value of those two senses and ever since, i've tried to incorporate those lessons. :> and i'm flattered, of course.
redrocks: damn, that's impressive!
ed -
redrocks said on Feb 20, 2007....
why is it impressive?? -
silverwhisper said on Feb 20, 2007....
it's impressive b/c IMX, not all women can accomplish that.
ed -
lilnempho said on Feb 20, 2007....
SW this is sooo hot. Im breathless. @#*@ -
Zayda said on Feb 20, 2007....
Can I say reading this a second time is even better because I've noticed that I really like the pacing of the story. It's got great rhythm.
[fans self]
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mysterious said on Feb 21, 2007....
dude, and i thought this was like a blog on charity work, "giving a hand" HAHAHHAAAA so delicious! -
silverwhisper said on Feb 21, 2007....
lilnempho: thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
super z: not that i don't appreciate the compliment but this one just flowed so effortlessly i can't see it. :>
mysterious: heh...i've always found it useful to examine the tags on something before opening it. glad you liked it!
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MissMimi said on Feb 21, 2007....
[sigh] Yep. Still works for me. -
kittens_in_mittens said on Aug 13, 2007....
in my experience (and yes, i do have smaller hands than a guy) i would say that most women (particularly those that have given birth) can take a fist..........most however just don't know how to get past the pain, they don't realise that the pain is only present on knuckle entry and is gone as soon as he is inside...............kits x -
silverwhisper said on Aug 13, 2007....
mimi: i'm glad, then. :D
kits: hey there! i think most people don't like the idea of pain all that much and are quite happy to find the fastest way to stop the pain, myself. :>
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MissMimi said on Aug 13, 2007....
Well, there are those who find pain (the right kind of pain) to be exquisitely arousing. [sigh]
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silverwhisper said on Aug 13, 2007....
i'll confess, i'm really not one of them, myself but i sorta understand the appeal.
ed
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