• Hegemone said on Oct 30, 2009....

  I have a serious response and a silly one.
  
  Serious:  I love this poem, it makes you question yourself and what you've done, and what you should do.  Very interesting.
  
  Silly:  As to what else can I do in the wind?  Well, what kind of wind is it ... what does it smell like? If it stinks, I run away from it.  Huh, maybe that's my problem ... I need to stand against the stinky wind ... maybe that's part of what I need to change about current events in my life.  Wait, this answer isn't so silly anymore.  Look what you did Trav!  No, really, just purely because it made me stumble on that thought ... great job!   :-D
  

• travelr712 said on Oct 31, 2009....

  if just one person likes it, then i've done my job :-)

• queenparanoia said on Oct 31, 2009....

  okay so youre better at writing poetry than me... ;-P

• Me-Myself&I said on Oct 31, 2009....

  lonely poem.

  well, i serve my profile here.... i'm nothing more than Dust in the wind!

• travelr712 said on Oct 31, 2009....

  hmm youyour, lonely? i wouldn't have thought that, i was watching the wind when i wrote this. it's very interesting to me the different impressions i get of my poems.

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