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I just need to wash today off my skin,

Wash you off my skin.

I need to get rid of the smell of defeat,

Smell of the joints I've smoked.

I burnt my finger, but the pain doesn't compare,

Pain of my heart breaking.

My chest feels the weight of a heavy heart,

Heavy with this burden that is you.

As I lay down to sleep I die inside,

Die with too many regrets.

 

Am I pushing my writing on you guys? :S haha

And just a note.. persay you wanted to use this for some bizzare reason.. ask me? plznthnx :D



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  • Hegemone said on Oct 30, 2009....
    Huh, that's pretty raw, realistic and emotional too.  I like it, you can depict a specific scene, but at the same time, you only know that there is pain, but not WHY there is pain.  Very interesting.
  • NewSoul651 said on Oct 31, 2009....
    haha, thanks! I loove feedback.

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