Pitter, patter.
Pitter, patter.
The rain falls down,
Glistening light shines obscured.
Splish, splash.
Splish, splash.
The water gathers,
Ripple and chaos form patterns.
Drip, drop.
Drip, drop.
The sound of rhythm,
Earth drums beat gently.
Mr.Strange posted on Oct 21, 2009
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Pitter, patter.
Pitter, patter.
The rain falls down,
Glistening light shines obscured.
Splish, splash.
Splish, splash.
The water gathers,
Ripple and chaos form patterns.
Drip, drop.
Drip, drop.
The sound of rhythm,
Earth drums beat gently.
Comments
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Me-Myself&I said on Oct 21, 2009....
your senses are in tone with the earth, i see. too cool. its the small pleasures in life that are the best. i enjoyed the poem. take care -
Mr.Strange said on Oct 21, 2009....
Thank you,
At the time, I was put in a place of awe,
I have been getting that a lot lately.
lol
It shares well in poetry,
talking it through tends to frighten people.
lol
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UnicornForm said on Oct 21, 2009....
I llove the rain. -
WithoutShade said on Oct 22, 2009....
*smile* -
Mr.Strange said on Oct 22, 2009....
Unicorn, I would agree rain is an interesting thing, kind of a symphony on the senses.
Without, Thank you.
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k666 said on Oct 24, 2009....
I like the mood and the images you create. Calming, :) -
Mr.Strange said on Oct 27, 2009....
It was quite the experience.
=~)
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