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Neath the starry skies,

is where I was first saw her for what she meant,

neath the blazing sun,

is where she first saw me for what I meant.

 

Neath the starry skies,

in each other’s arms were those cozy nights spent,

neath the blazing sun,

is where those arms pulled apart and to different directions we went.

 

Neath the starry skies,

is where we always cuddled and together we dreamt,

and neath the blazing sun,

is where those dreams one unfortunate day got bent.

 

And today as I kneel neath those starry skies,

I pray with all my heart and soul instead of just sit and repent,

that just like the stars forever scattered about us,

that magic of yore surrounds us again like a never ending torrent.



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  • AlleyCatMomma said on Sep 30, 2009....
    That was very beautiful and made me really feel the longing. I love the imagery. thank you for sharing this. Really lovely.
  • Me-Myself&I said on Sep 30, 2009....

    real nice!

  • Mr.Strange said on Oct 04, 2009....
    I enjoy the poem...

    would you like me to teach you some tactics to make some new poems about some new women??

    The tactics include finding new women.

    The offer is open my friend.
  • the.food.critic said on Nov 07, 2009....
    Thank you AlleyCatMomma, Me-Myself&I, and Mr.Strange, for the compliments. And Mr.Strange, I don't want to make any new poems about any new women, there's only 1 woman that I love. And even if I did'nt, you'll notice from my new post that I don't really need any tactics to find new women, they usually find their way to me. But thanks for the offer anyway. :-)

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