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When there's no more you, is there half of me?
Wasn't I all that was supposed to be?
Should I worry now or just wait and see?
And then after that, do I call it free?
 
Should I weap and moan for unfettered loss?
Should I curl in bed and let grow the moss?
Should they see me hang on my bloody cross?
Was this all because you just can't be boss?
 
Do I worry how they all see me now?
Do I look for one who can show me how?
Do I stand more pain than life will allow?
Should I tell my friends you're a big fat cow?
 
Will the lonely nights be all that I spend?
Will this broken bleeding heart ever mend?
Will this be my life long romantic trend?
What to do now that words are at an end?


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  • suckmydick said on Aug 19, 2009....
    Good poem mate, its great to see soulcast allowing mental challenged to use the same website.
  • Hegemone said on Aug 19, 2009....
    Trav, that was a very touching poem.  I was a little emotional to begin with, given some of tonight's events, but this has added to it in a good way.  Thank you for sharing.
  • travelr712 said on Aug 19, 2009....
    i also think it's great that they let you on sd, they're usually pickier than that. what are you mentally challenged with?
     
    sorry you had a bad day hege, glad this made you feel better :-)
  • Lioness said on Aug 19, 2009....
    I could feel the sadness. Nice poem, so, what's the big fat cow doing? :)
  • travelr712 said on Aug 19, 2009....
    no idea ss ss, this isn't about anyone in particular, it's about loss. that's my favorite line btw :-)
  • hotaka said on Aug 19, 2009....
    Maybe just call her a cow and be done with it.
    Loss is something I have a hard time dealing with so I can only say... um...uhh...
    Call her a cow and be done with it.
  • woman said on Aug 20, 2009....
    I know, in fact I imagine we all know, those feelings of loss. I find it unusual if you recently wrote this and it isn't about a particular person or current situation. I seldom write that way. Keep writing.
  • UnicornForm said on Aug 20, 2009....
    I felt the sadness to well written trav.
  • travelr712 said on Aug 20, 2009....
    well, i suppose that's a way to go hottie :-)
     
    i wrote it last night woman, it took me about 20 mins. i get an idea, and i draw upon the emotions of my past, so it's about all the losses i've experienced, not anyone in particular. in this case, the first line sorta came to me, i think i was listening to that commercial with the heart song 'how can i get you alone' while i was putting the dishes away, and started thinking about being alone, how i got that way, lost my 'other half', and this was the result.
     
    thank you uf :-)

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It is harder to share pain than it is joy. Sometime with the help of friends and family, we endure our pains. But sometimes we have to stand alone. But if you maintain a postive outlook and endure cheerfully, we will find more company along the way....

And

and...
I suppose, anyway, just quit looking at my coffee ... that'll get you into trouble and you don't want trouble....
uggghh...
for my love....