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To me, it appears in such society…
Death has made good on a kingdom.
For us to stand up and to slave for this now
Would be the very bane of our freedom..
 
Could we stand here and say
In this time.. in this day…
That we really feel the wind on our faces?
Have we really seen these places…?
Or are we eluded the truest of joys
By habits, and claims more pretentious?
 
The truest of deaths
Is the death of the spirit
And while you may claim absolution…
Your life like the masses is covered and shrouded
drawing nigh is your disillusion


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  • HisFairMaiden said on Jun 27, 2009....
    hi balefish~

    i especially like the last stanza...

    very dark, very absolute

    nice  work!


    ~fair maiden~
  • soaringraven said on Jul 04, 2009....
    Very good, I'm not usually one for poetry but this is quite good actually.
     
    soaring
  • Balefish said on Jul 04, 2009....
    thank you =)

    I ought to check out your posts hm?

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Written and performed for the Trans Day of Remembrance....
I dedicate these words to poetzsoul, in hopes that her next 25 years are motivating....
The darker it gets, the closer I'll be....
I had to. It has been brought up too often for me to resist....
Say Goodnight

Close your eyes
Under starlit skies...