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I write a lot. I have two binders full of ideas, poems, short stories, things of that sort that I have accumulated over the years. 

Now I'm not saying I produce anything good, lol, but I don't really share anything I write because... well, I'm a coward. Hahaha. Anyway, I wrote a song for the very first time. I got inspired from my situation with the boyfriend and thought I'd share.....


What I Know Now

Crowded restaurant
Cold October night
You showed up
Just to hear me say good-bye.
Lookin' so good in that green shirt,
I needed a cigarette
Because I came to do
the one thing I'd come to regret.

But how was I to know
Driving away would be that hard for me?
And how was I to know
You'd become more than just a memory?

Staying up late,
Unable to fall asleep
Afraid that dreaming of you
Would come back to haunt me.
Hearing your sweet voice,
Feeling your soft touch;
All I kept thinking about
Was how to get back to "us"

How was I to know
That leaving would be such a big mistake?
And how was I to know
I'd be the one left with this heartache?

It took me some time
But I came to understand
That there's no way
I could ever love another man.
And now we're together
I'm laying next to you
My heart is totally yours
The way I feel is true....

And now I know,
No baby, there ain't no doubt;
Now I know,
That you're the one I can't live without.


And there it is.

You ever get inspired and do something you've never done???


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  • fragglesrock said on May 01, 2009....
    i love the lyrics :) i've often been inspired to do something new but i tend to get frustrated and give up!
  • Brunettebmshell said on May 01, 2009....

    fraggs - thank you very much! And yes, I know what you mean. I tried learning the guitar and about near threw the damned thing across the room. I may have lost the war, but haven't lost the battle. I'm gearin up for round 2! lol : )


  • travelr712 said on May 01, 2009....
    hey, that's pretty good bb
  • Brunettebmshell said on May 01, 2009....
    Thanks trav! : P 

    Have you done anything you normally don't due to the inspiration bug biting you in the ass???




  • travelr712 said on May 01, 2009....
    not that i know of bb, why do you ask?
  • Brunettebmshell said on May 01, 2009....

    Cause the was the follow up question silly. Read the fine print below the song, lol.
  • travelr712 said on May 01, 2009....
    yeah, i read it after i commented, i don't always pay close enough attention. maybe the possible end of financial worries for the moment has freed my mind for more important pursuits?
  • mOOn_platOOn said on May 02, 2009....
    O
     
    Do you have music? Or is it a poem? 'Cause you called it a song, so did you write it while playing a guitar or sitting at a keyboard? Or is the tune in your head?
     
    O
  • Goose21 said on May 02, 2009....
    thanks for sharing 
  • jul said on May 02, 2009....
    "Now I'm not saying I produce anything good, lol, but I don't really share anything I write because... well, I'm a coward."

    Hey, you shouldn't be afraid to share something beautiful like this!

    Just kidding:

    If I wrote songs as cliché and awful as yours, I'd probably be afraid to let others read them as well!
  • WithoutShade said on May 03, 2009....
    Can't wait to hear it played and sung.
    -WS
  • Brunettebmshell said on May 04, 2009....
    Trav - So are your financial woes coming to an end? Or were you saying that IF it was a possibility of them coming to an end... then you'll focus on other things?

    Moon - Hi there : ) It is a song. I have the tune and sing it, but it hasn't been placed with music yet. I started learning the guitar, but I am afraid that I am no good just yet. Hopefully soon I will piece it together. 

    Hiya Goose! Thanks very much for stopping by : )

    jul - thanks for the input.

    WS - Well thank you! Appreciate the support ; P If/when I place it with music, I will record it for you to hear : P 


  • travelr712 said on May 04, 2009....
    that they're coming to an end bb, at least for awhile :-)
  • Brunettebmshell said on May 04, 2009....
    Well I am VERY glad to hear that. I know how burdening that feels... sucks! 


  • jul said on May 04, 2009....
    Anytime sugar
  • travelr712 said on May 04, 2009....
    thank you bb, and you're right, it does suck.

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