I love writing; I love language; it is my passion, I would make sweet, sweet love to my notebook were it physically possible or socially acceptable. Lucky for me, not only is english my love, it is also my gift, and I'm sure of it. But I have a friend who has the same affair with writing as I do, and she is convinced she lacks the needed talents.

 

I did get her to sign up on SoulCast, so she can post her writing and get feedback. And she definitely needs the feedback, because she has a way with language that is effective, especially when it comes to description. She has her weak spots, but every writer does, and she needs advice on how to improve.

 

First post she did was a sex scene, second post she did was a more PG sex scene intended to be worked into an eventual teen novel.

 

So take a look and give her some pointers if you can. Be brutal, it's only necessary. =)

 

Here she is: http://www.soulcast.com/Edriisxe/