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it's an
unlikely confluence. and inevitable
 
how
 
we
find (our)selves here
as if    looking  for each   other.   when
 
 
 
it isn't     (for   each   other)        
                   ever       thattogether we're  something  of   a dangerous  entity
 
our monsters-in-waiting,  creeping forward  sheepish, malnourished,
introduce themselves     politely
 
they give no
chase
 
grown
 
tired of us.
 
so what should
we
 
do  for blood and
guts
 
to  speak
of.
 
I find
in the tangle of our threads   and  lures
 
where your unsullied stream  rushes into mine.
 
the love of
self-torture   and virtues of denial.       abominations,  you
 
(should know)         sacrifices counting for nothing   just
 
our
 scars and scary faces
touching
 
me
a little   too  deep-
ly
 
just
 
like you're
holding
my
 
face
in
 
 
faultless
 
hands

 

and then

(parting)

 

forgetting ourselves here,

we’re queer

in another sense

 

how we found

 

each other    (each)

 

 (   lacking  in   )   something

scabbed and

scratching,  hording     and 

 

greedy               for

 

simple kind

words and

touches

 

                   your words pre-dating mine   for centuries  

   in                                          defeat;

 

we’ve been

fabricating
what doesn’t

exist and  stretching

the

 

truth of

its fabric so  far

 

it

 

nearly

could;

 

nearly covers the both

just

(barely)

with

our

chests    scored  and

faces

un-

 

 adorned,    seen  and only shouted    enough

 

 

a

mis-

placed

fragment of

light

 

holds

the

 

door   of

one

room      (to the other)

 

open   

 

        (our)   parts



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Comments

  • seer said on Mar 14, 2009....
    Ok, I am not a thesbian at all, why is  the poem laid out like that?
  • Misty_Eyed said on Mar 16, 2009....
    it's mostly about where the breaks and pauses should go, emphasis on certain words, and also visual patterns (but still, I'm pretty sloppy about all these things)
  • seer said on Mar 17, 2009....

    oooh ok.

    See told you I was thick!

  • Misty_Eyed said on Mar 19, 2009....
    that doesn't make you thick, but I am wondering if you really meant to spell Thespian that way :-)
  • seer said on Mar 19, 2009....
    Yes, I did! I have Dyspraxia, its a lerning difficulty that effects my spelling.
  • Misty_Eyed said on Mar 26, 2009....
    that's a damn cool name (dyspraxia), but I suppose that would be a real pain in the butt (at least when you're stuck in grade school). i think spelling tests are basically just cruel, because some people will always have a rough time with the words no matter what
  • WithoutShade said on Jun 03, 2009....
    Particularly measured.
    Uniquely emphasized.
    Splendid vernacular.

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