• GrapeKoolaid said on Aug 28, 2006....

  That was really good.
  I wish I could write like that.
  Perhaps not today.
  
  Torpedo boobies,
  Knocking CD's off the shelf,
  Please watch where you tread.
  
  :)
  

• elleb84 said on Aug 28, 2006....

  Hey Dan,
  nice Haiku, and thanks for posting on my blog, you are welcomed back anytime!
  

• LadyNikki523 said on Aug 28, 2006....

  I like it. It's like you've wrapped up womanhood into just a few words. By the way, thank you for commenting on my poem. I have answered your questions back on my page.
  

• Danj3ris said on Sep 07, 2006....

  I will slyly use a comment to write another Haiku! Lets see who will find it first!
  
  **Secret Danj3ris Haiku 1**
  
  Tepid Waters Rush
  Marble Leads The Cascading
  Hotel Washrooms Rule
  
  GrapeKoolaid, you inspired this.
  

• GrapeKoolaid said on Sep 16, 2006....

  Thank you very much.
  Though I don't deserve such praise.
  I just love haikus.
  
  Keep it up!
  
  :)
  

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