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Is there a one who could resist
Your perfect eyes
Your perfect wrists

Who could not love your golden hair
Your golden feet
As you stand there?

And who among these mortal men
Would dare defy
those fingers ten

If one should beckon, they would run
And follow you
Til day be done

And someday we will all grow old,
Yet still we'll love
Your ankles gold

And still we'll wait for you to choose
Which one as lover
You will use.


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  • moonriver said on Jan 26, 2009....
    bull's eye.
    such a simple truth to behold.
    and yet a truth that eludes a million blinded mortal men.
    trampling on each other to worship at her pedestal.
    once more, an excellent sort of like a poem.
    psst. i been blinded and blindsided myself.
    but now i know better. heh.
    thanks, busy lady.

  • busybusybusy said on Jan 26, 2009....
    nice to see you around again, mr. moon.
    been up to anything lately?

    love,
    anonymous
  • moonriver said on Jan 26, 2009....
    oh the usual things.
    rushing papers for two conferences.
    sneaking into my home city for lunar new year and a clan reunion.
    waiting for my only pair of eyeglasses to be repaired.
    and now, reading you. :-)

  • busybusybusy said on Jan 26, 2009....
    i went with my boyfriend to get his eyeglasses repaired not too long ago.
    the lady fixing them said the only problem was, all his screws were loose.

    hah!

    love,
    anonymous
  • moonriver said on Jan 26, 2009....
    LOL!
    one of these days i'm going to blog about how my eyeglasses got broken, and how i survive in the meantime.
    it didn't really break. i didn't sit or step on it or anything.
    i was in the wilds with my dog, looking for feral chicken and checking for water pipe leaks, when i noticed the left lens was missing.
    i searched all along the side trails where my dog and i ranged that morning.
    i couldn't find it.
    like you said, all my screws were loose.
    and i didn't even notice it soon enough.
    hah indeed!

  • Me-Myself&I said on Jan 27, 2009....
    i just love your sort of like a poems.  thank you. HI Moon! *smile*  have a good day take care ~see ya
  • FutureGoddess said on Jan 27, 2009....
    Lovely poem
  • diabolicdame said on Jan 27, 2009....
    What a cute poem! Thanks for sharing!!  :-)
  • busybusybusy said on Jan 27, 2009....
    thanks to you all for reading!
    love, anonymous
  • UnicornForm said on Sep 22, 2009....
    I like this one to...
     
    xoxo

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