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There’s a sad clockwork boy, with a box full of parts. Some for his head, some for his heart.

When he looks at the box, all the pieces seem lost. One piece at a time, as this was the cost

For loving her dearly, never questioning why. Like the motion of water, or the blue in the sky.

“We’ll spend forever together, I promise you this” she’d whispered so clearly, and sealed with a kiss.

But something she’d hidden and had never told, with each piece of his heart, the boy would grow cold.

With each passing of time, the more she would take. Till hollow and numb, the boys heart it did break.

“Look what you’ve done” the boy said to the girl, his eyes stinging with tears, his lips starting to curl.

She threw back her hair, a smile starting to break. “What good are you now I’ve got nothing to take?”

“Together forever, you promised me that”. Tears falling like oceans, on the floor he now sat.

Her hand opened up, the bits feel to the ground. The shattered pieces of heart made a dull metal sound.

As she walked away poised, he struggled to find, in the salt watered dust, the bits left behind.

So now, dearest reader, that’s why this tale starts, with a sad clockwork boy, with a box full of parts



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  • Misty_Eyed said on Dec 10, 2008....
    this sounds so familiar from somewhere (maybe just a deja-vu type thing)
     
    it's absolutely beautiful
  • zykore said on Dec 13, 2008....
    thank you misty. im hoping its not a copy, i spent an hour and a half writting it!
  • TheEmpress said on Jul 26, 2009....
    Enjoyed this one.  You are very well written. 
  • zykore said on Jul 28, 2009....
    thank you so much empress. i don't wirte for others, but maybe that creates more emotion for me when it is recieved with praise as you've so kindly given to me.
  • TheEmpress said on Jul 28, 2009....
    It's just refreshing and impressive to see the picture painted so clearly and full of emotion.. all in words. 

    You are humbly Welcome.

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