• junioreditor said on Oct 14, 2008....

  Is it possible the Client presented the police with a gift of a recording device, or a public address system?  If that is the case, I suppose someone could have spoken into his presents.
  More revisions were on my desk when I checked in this morning:
  
  Many in law enforcement who had (have) read what you have written, openly spoke in my presents (presence) and stated you carry all the earmarks of an Internet predator, (which is) unsettling.
  More than a single detective spoke of how often you use [ i ] (?) in some of your more emotional or sympathetic post(s),. (While) none found you uninteresting, (most found you to be) more of a study.
  
  I haven't sorted the rest yet. I thought I'd just wait until the champers takes effect.
  
  
  

• Lucytorial said on Oct 14, 2008....

  I've been busy proofing and can't make head nor tail of any of this.  Can someone please pass me the asprin and Fabio... I need his magic hands to relieve the presence of my rather painful aching head.
   
  Juni ~ Are you ready for a double shot of Machiato?

• junioreditor said on Oct 15, 2008....

  You know she's not the only woman who felt/feels that way about you, imo. Is this a statement of fact, or merely your opinion? Make up your mind. You toss “imo” in there as though it means nothing. You are either stating a fact (You know she’s not the only woman who feels this way about you.) or you are offering an opinion (In my opinion she’s not the only woman who feels this way.)

  
  

  These are in no order whatsoever. I'm just grabbing and editing.

  Client is an opinionated old reprobate, isn't he?

  That's only imo, of course. *giggling*
  

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• junioreditor said on Oct 15, 2008....

  What in heaven's name? Does that mean my writing displays no style?
  The cheek!
  Yes, thanks, Ms T.
  Ooh, lovely.
  
  
  Hmmmph, no style. I never...
  

• travelr712 said on Oct 15, 2008....

  welcome back ladies. interesting times while you were sunning yourselves in the brilliance of fabio, yes?

• Expendable said on Oct 15, 2008....

  The client has stated at various times that they were a "cop" (possibly retired), a private detective and a federal agent (retired). Someone has also told me they were told client was a cop. I haven't checked her bio - that's legal's job, but I think this is something that should definitely should be checked out.
   
  I've had a couple of feelers out on the private detective angle on one of the alts and found something but nothing really conclusive.
   
  If this is their delusion, this could explain a few of the power trips and odd behaviors.

• travelr712 said on Oct 15, 2008....

  from an admission in a previous literary work, the client admitted to the fact that her husband was indeed a cop, however, he was arrested for possessing child pornography. perhaps legal should take a look at possible ramifications of this situation?

• Lucytorial said on Oct 15, 2008....

  Of course, there is also the fact that client has obviously skipped the mental institution.  Clients Dr called me this afternoon stating quite clearly that his client was in need of further treatments, the dillusory aspects of the multiple personalities, he said, are creating confussion in clients mind, which in turn, creates rather unreadable text.
   
  BB ~ Would have a double heart attack knowing this clients about to implode upon itself all manner of shit, possibly harming further sales.
   

• FableJHill said on Oct 17, 2008....

  I find you hilarious. Feel free to edit me any time. ;)

• PaigeLe'Editor said on Oct 18, 2008....

  Oh, thank you my dear!
  All in a day's work!

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