BreatheUnderwater's tags:
i've been walking around
being aground
where should i sleep
burning my eyes
burning my mind
finding my beat
 
i've been catching my breath
being alone
hurting my feet
burning my soul
burning my life
finding my streets
 
someone takes it away
closing her eyes
ending her fear
the strangling marks 
should not be there
for all to see
 
 
and it keeps me waiting
 
 
24 years
you think you did
all your time
you found jesus
should he find me
before you get out
 
thinking of her
wide open eyes
colorless lips
the only cross
the one on my back
the demon he speaks
 
i'm needing my boots
staying aground
needing to sleep
holding my gun
not longer a child
a killer to be.
 
 
 
 


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  • gingersoul said on Oct 11, 2008....
    Breathe......yes, i like it....no, its not you...no, it could be you....
    yes, i like it...no, its not you....yes it's you, or me, or everyone.....

    Poetry is something that makes us speak to each other while we speak of ourselves.

    Very nice job...:-)
  • secretlife said on Oct 11, 2008....
    i like it breathe-  it could easily be put to music....not the first time i've made that comment on one of your poems...
     
  • Misty_Eyed said on Oct 15, 2008....
    awesome (and a challenging kind of piece to write)

    +
    gingersoul, well said!

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