BreatheUnderwater's tags:
hovering around
dangerous tension
eyes smile
the naughtiest
fashion
sealed lips
body
language
thrill seeking
seconds
delaying
the destined
 
my cheek
against yours
before i reach
for your lips
unpredictable sighs
desire a kiss
my hand comes up
slowly
no way to withstand
the longing
to grab you
until inside you
it ends
 


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  • Me-Myself&I said on Aug 21, 2008....
    wow! i posted a poem about longing. huh....*smile* you said it well. it must be in the air. ~see ya
  • lionesss said on Aug 21, 2008....
    very good indeed,cant wait for then 2nd poem you write xx
  • secretlife said on Aug 21, 2008....
    loved it miss naughty girl!
  • BreatheUnderwater said on Aug 22, 2008....

    memy : in the air it is ;)

    lioness: i'll try to hurry

    secret: ... erm..did you just call me miss naughty girl?..or do you miss someone called naughty girl? ..if it's the 1st..erm..Mr naughty guy would be fine...if it's the 2nd..i'd like to meet her.where can i find her? 

  • secretlife said on Aug 22, 2008....
    ok mr naughty guy......
     
  • BreatheUnderwater said on Aug 22, 2008....

    ROFL..you thought i was a girl?  hmmmz..there goes the macho image i am so desperately trying to keep up..

    i'm gonna sit in a corner and cry now....

    ;)

  • secretlife said on Aug 22, 2008....
    LOL........ no crying big boy.
    i promise not to make that mistake again!
  • BreatheUnderwater said on Aug 22, 2008....
    just to make sure i left you a very subtle comment somewhere...i don't have enough time anymore to do my nails now..but..well..that's allright...
     
    *pouts* 
  • BreatheUnderwater said on Aug 22, 2008....


    breathe singing along with this masculine singer... i'm a maaaaaaaaaaaannnnn lalalaaaaaaaaa

     

    (i'm sorry...i'm having fun with this..i will restrain myself now.. :)   )

  • lionesss said on Aug 22, 2008....

    Hahahahahahaha you're soooooooooooo funny, that last bit made me laff hahahaha xxxx lionesss

     

  • wishyouwerehere said on Aug 23, 2008....
    Oh lordy - I confess - I thought you were a naughty girl myself, but this little tidbit made the poem even more juicy!  LOL.  Poor secret - you were not alone on this one!  Sorry Breathe - I am sure you are much more masculine than Boy George!  If not, it's ok - I always thought he was kind of sexy.
  • phoeby said on Aug 23, 2008....
    that's so funny she thought you were a girl! awesome poem.

    phoeby
  • BreatheUnderwater said on Aug 23, 2008....
    lionesss...yeah, i'm glad i can laugh about it too ;)
     
    wishyouwerehere...uhm...ok...this is so good for my ego..really..lol..but i have to admit i am starting to wonder why a little...
     
    phoeby...sigh..i guess she wasn't the only one.. lol
  • wishyouwerehere said on Aug 23, 2008....
    I'm guilty of a horrible stereotype, Breathe - I have far more reason to be ashamed than you do!  I assumed you were a female because you seemed too expressive and sensitive to be a man.  Isn't that horrible?!  Seriously - my apologies on that one.  Guess that taught me a lesson.  I'm glad you have a good sense of humor!
  • silverwhisper said on Aug 24, 2008....
    nicely done, breathe!

    ed

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a poem by elizabeth barret browning......
"seriously, theres something wrong with you. look at what you write for example..."...
IT'S really hard to be the other girl.
you just don't know where to stand....
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