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So when you here those 3 words what does it make you think.....?
You see them all the time - but do they ever make you think about anything inparticular.
This is what i think..........some people say I think too much........you decide.....

On promenades where drunks propose;
 to lonely arcade mannequins
Where ceremonies pause ;
at the jewelers shop display
Feigning casual silence;
 in strained romantic interludes
Till they commit themselves;
 to the muted journey home
And the pool player rests on another cue
Last nights hero picking up his dues
A honeymoon gambled on a ricochet
Shes staring at the brochures at the holidays
Chalking up a name in your hometown
Standing all your mates to another round
Laughing at the world till the barman wipes away;
the warm wet circles

The warm wet circles

In a warm wet circle
Like a mothers kiss on your first broken heart,
A warm wet circle
Like a bullet hole in the local park,
A warm wet circle
You would always surrender
to the warm wet circle

It was a wedding ring,
Destined to be found in a cheap hotel
Lost in a kitchen sink or thrown in
a wishing well


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  • quietone said on Aug 02, 2008....
    Oh, my gosh, cuppa... that is a beautiful piece.  when I thought of warm, wet, circile I thought of the circle that is created on top of a cup of hot chocolate when stirrred ever so gently.  ~  Unfortunately,  my circle of wedding rings are very very cold.
  • OscarB said on Aug 03, 2008....
    Love that...
  • SensualGirl said on Aug 03, 2008....
    Gee Cuppa, that is rather deep and quite melancholic.  But I like it all the same.  Is it the work of your hands? 
     
    ~Sensual Girl~

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