BreatheUnderwater's tags:
she finds her smile
so slowly
she leaves her breath
to enchant
 
i see her eyes
inside me
i feel her mind
like mine
 
she holds the truth
when i'm a liar
she held my hand
when i died
 
i made her run
to go after
she made me smile
to show pain
 
she needs to stay
can't be without her
i need to leave
to make me sane
 
she watched me crash
into the darkness
she let me live
forgotten life
 
 


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  • phoeby said on Jul 29, 2008....
    that's beautiful, breathe. 
  • BreatheUnderwater said on Jul 29, 2008....
    thank you Phoeby :)
  • silverwhisper said on Jul 31, 2008....
    BU, that's extraordinary!

    ed
  • lionesss said on Aug 03, 2008....
    you have a way with words and how you write is just amazing, iv been reading your posts and im gobbed smacked at some of it great,,,,,,,lionesss xx

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