Today the air is moist and thick
Heavy, like a great big brick
It's going to be really hot
I wish it would rather not
But from the window I see
A ripe tomato peeking at me
That makes me smile
I've been waiting for a while
There will be okra and cucumbers too
Out there hiding in the morning dew
The coming rain does not help my mood
But it sure is making a bounty of food
So I will be thankful for abundance today
And hope that the rain has a brief stay
by CW
CreativeWoman posted on Jul 18, 2008
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Mamie said on Jul 18, 2008....
good morning my friend,and I hope you are well.I enjoyed your poem, I thinkit is swell!I find that the thunder and raintends to bea reminder of showering gracesfor theeSo batten the hatches andhunker on downto relax and enjoy the rain pouring downremember the okra and flowers will smileto be cleansed by the dewdropsand refresh for a whileand you, in your office will not miss a beaton all of your blogs, both soulcast and sweet!have a great day! mamie -
MissMimi said on Jul 18, 2008....
I love these blogs in rhyme!
Hope they will continue for a very long time.
Nice, CDub!
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wombat said on Jul 18, 2008....
You are right,It's awfully warm....Hope where you areYou are missing the storm!Sorry I jumped in,I beg your parden---But I love your odeto the vegetable garden! -
CreativeWoman said on Jul 18, 2008....
Mamie,
You are so kind
To respond in rhyme
Reminding me not to be a dope
Because with rain there is always hope
For rebirth of of many things
And the abundance that always brings
Mimi,
I'm glad you like
My little poetic hikes
Maybe I'll just continue
At this little venue
Wombat,
You always have a seat
At this place we meet
It's so very nice to know
You liked my rhyme of where things grow
CW
(Thank you all for having some fun with me.) -
hotaka said on Jul 19, 2008....
Very nice, CW. You made me smile, though the heavy humidity and hot weather here are among my most disliked things about living in this part of Japan. But that's summer here. You poem is very simple and sweet. I liked it very much. I am glad you stopped by my post because I clicked on your name by your comment to see what you were up to and I found this little gem. I hope you have a great weekend! -
queenparanoia said on Jul 19, 2008....
good morning to you!!! =) -
CreativeWoman said on Jul 20, 2008....
hotaka,
I'm glad you liked it. :-) I always love taking a peek at what you've been up to too.
queen,
Singing in the Rain is one of my all time favorite musicals! Thank you!
CW
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