she shuddered at the feeling of his fingers as he langorously unbuttoned her blouse. from behind, the unmistakable shape of his hardness pressed into the cleft of her bottom through their clothes. she sighed happily, reveling in how her body responded to his touch, how alive her skin felt in the cool evening air as he slipped off her top.
he leaned in, nibbling at her neck, slipping down the side towards her shoulder, then towards the small of her back as he crouched behind her. this lazy, meandering pattern served only to stoke the ember of her desire into a roaring flame.
already she could feel her twin nubs of desire responding to what he was doing, becoming firm. she turned to face him, saw him still crouching on the grass before, and smiled in a way both playful and wicked.
he unbuttoned her jeans with his teeth and pulled down the denim to reveal the black cotton thong beneath. hooking the fabric at her hips, slowly he slid them down to reveal her hidden, trimmed delta.
taking his head in her hands, she drew him in, savoring the coolness of the early summer night against her newly-exposed skin. the thought of doing this here, where they could almost be seen by passersby, sent a bolt of desire through her body.
eagerly, he dove in, tongue & lips teasing—taunting!—her. the warmth of his breath, the teasing, were overwhelming, and her fingers curled into claws. head thrown back, she wondered what this might look like: a woman receiving oral sex from a man crouched at her feet.
she stepped slowly out of her jeans and thong, stepped out of her flats and lost herself to this glorious tongue-lashing, bucking gently against him, pressing the hardened center of her passion against his upper lip.
the thrill of discovery and his talented tongue were taking her to the very brink, she could almost taste her release…
and with that, she pulled back. flashing that playful/wicked smile again, she fell upon him. “enough about me: now it’s your turn.”
his answering look almost sent her careening over the edge.
this time it was her clever hands drawing forth his moans as she pulled off his t-shirt to expose his chest as her weight pressed him down to the ground. her teeth made a trail from his chest, lingered at his nipples, then moved directly to the button of his shorts. repeating his gesture, she pulled them and his boxers down over his hips to reveal his hardness, already wet and glistening in the twilight.
she could feel him kicking off his shoes behind her as she ran her lips from the base of him along the underside to the head, savoring the sweetness of his excitement.
a breeze tickled at her lower mouth, sparking an idea. she spun around, never breaking contact with his member and allowed him to return to what he’d been doing earlier.
his hands immediately caught her hips, pulling her sweetness down to him.
and now, the circuit was closed: mouth to sex, sex to mouth…a wonderful wet whirlpool of desire drawing them ever deeper into one another. at times, one or the other would stop, break away, the panting only briefly interrupting the pulse pounding in their ears, beating as one…
until together, they exploded, comets filling the early evening sky.
finis
silverwhisper posted on Jul 18, 2008
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SensualGirl said on Jul 18, 2008....
Ed this is a perfect example proving that you are the expert and I am the amature!I absolutely LOVED it.....great imagery! You've given me some inspiration, thank you!~Sensual Girl~ -
CreativeWoman said on Jul 18, 2008....
I agree that the imagery was great, Ed. Wonderful writing.
CW
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silverwhisper said on Jul 19, 2008....
SG: thank you, but while i'm somewhat satisfied with it, i'm not at all happy with that last line, actually: it feels a bit forced to me but i was in a hurry when i wrote it. i'm also kicking myself for not having given them names: there's way too much "he" this or "she" that. ah, well...
but i'm glad it's inspired you. :>
CW: yeah, i think i'm happy in most cases with the imagery--thank you--but on other fronts, the mechanics of this aren't right, as i mentioned to CW. i can't believe i neglected to name the two, for starters!
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queenparanoia said on Jul 19, 2008....
okay my mouth is now completely open and i can't think of anything else but thisis so hot!!! =) -
silverwhisper said on Jul 19, 2008....
why thank you! :>
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ssmithford said on Jul 23, 2008....
OMG! HOT-HOT-HOT! Ok, you have GOT to tell me where else you publish at!Sammantha -
silverwhisper said on Jul 25, 2008....
hey there! i thought you might like this piece--thank you! if you're interested, i have other erotica here. :>
er...where else i publish?
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ssmithford said on Jul 25, 2008....
Lots of people publish in other blogs. Like www.literotica.com, ect. Although one thing I do like about Soulcast is that there are so many people here who are loyal to this site. -
silverwhisper said on Jul 25, 2008....
ah, so you're familiar with lit? :>
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ssmithford said on Jul 25, 2008....
Been a member since 2004?? Hehehe. -
idesire2 said on Jul 26, 2008....
i loved the story............
i think i make my stories too long......they go on and on and on and......
i really got a little warm feeling when i read ur story...
thank u
idesire2
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silverwhisper said on Jul 26, 2008....
ssmithford: i believe this calls for PMs. :>
idesire2: welcome to my blog & thanks for visiting! how did you ever find this?
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idesire2 said on Aug 01, 2008....
ed
thanks for the welcome. I really don't know how in the world i found you. But, i did. I've only been writing for a couple months. I'll try to keep it up because i like it.
id
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silverwhisper said on Aug 01, 2008....
i'm glad you enjoy it, that's great! i look forward to your future works as well. :>
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the.food.critic said on Sep 14, 2009....
I love the way you draw a word picture silverwhisperer. I could picture myself with my girl word for word, but maybe that's because we've had the exact same experience just a few weeks ago. But still, I like the way you put it. Keep it up.
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