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Silverwhisper (aka Ed) wrote:
 
she shuddered at the feeling of his fingers as he langorously unbuttoned her blouse. from behind, the unmistakable shape of his hardness pressed into the cleft of her bottom through their clothes. she sighed happily, reveling in how her body responded to his touch, how alive her skin felt in the cool evening air as he slipped off her top.

he leaned in, nibbling at her neck, slipping down the side towards her shoulder, then towards the small of her back as he crouched behind her. this lazy, meandering pattern served only to stoke the ember of her desire into a roaring flame.

already she could feel her twin nubs of desire responding to what he was doing, becoming firm. she turned to face him, saw him still crouchin on the grass before, and smiled in a way both playful and wicked.

so what happens next? :>
 
~Sensual Girl~ wrote:
 
She knew what was on his mind; it was written in passionate notes all over his face.  He was staring up at her erect dark pointy nipples, his ardour making his penis throb inside his trousers.  She was staring down at him. . .watching the big lump in between his legs.  They were just staring at each other stroking each other with their lusty eyes.
 
As if in a trance she brought her fingers up to her mouth and started wetting them with saliva.  She wanted to make him happy, to make him want her, to tease him a little.  He watched as she sensually sucked her fingers and felt his balls tightening at the pleasure of watching her.  He loved watching her this way, so sexual, so natural.
 
She then brought her wet fingers down to her perky nipples and started to circle, pull and pinch them all the while staring at his face; watching his desire rise.  She could feel her pleasure heighten as she saw him reach into his pants to start stroking his cock.  She smiled and he smiled back at her.
 
Her pussy was starting to wet her panties and she felt the urgent need to get her fingers in there!  She hiked up her skirt and pulled down her panties with such urgency that she tore them off.  Next thing her fingers were rubbing on her clit and she was showing him her swollen cunt for him to see how wet he was making her.  He was in awe at the beauty of that special little place; and how good it looked being opened up with her own fingers as she pleasured herself while watching him jerk on his cock.
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  • pusscat said on Jul 17, 2008....
    OK. . . OK. . . who is this woman pretending that she is also our little polar? 
     
    Has anyone called the authorities yet?  Shouldn't an APB be put out?
     
    My god woman - what are you trying to do to me just as I'm meant to be going to bed?!?!  I may have 10 minutes 'private time' while hubby is reading ha ha!
     
    I seriously believe you can give any erotic writer out there a run for their money.  What I love about this is the way the reader really feels the urgency that they feel and the obvious love between them not just lust. 
     
    Keep on writing girl :)
  • SensualGirl said on Jul 17, 2008....
    Pusscat, its Polar's alter ego. . .I guess I'm her evil twin LOL!
     
    From your words, I take it that it "ticked all your boxes"?? LOL! 
     
    I am really happy that you enjoy what I write.  I will keep writing even if just for you, becuase you provide me with so much incentive . . .the desire to keep pleasing! LOL!
     
    Hope you have a fab Friday.  Now going to respond to your PM.
     
    ~Sensual Girl~
  • CreativeWoman said on Jul 17, 2008....
    Wow! It felt to me as if they had an urgent need. 

    CW
  • SensualGirl said on Jul 17, 2008....
    CW, they certainly did! LOL!  Thanks for commenting!
     
    ~Sensual Girl~
  • 007Hardone said on Jul 18, 2008....
    With a story as nice as this one, I am now standing at attention! Now for their evening to last all night long now,,,,,
  • cuppajava said on Jul 18, 2008....
    Hi
    I would LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE to know where the inspiration for all this is coming from.If you ask me you - you are a natural at this - so I think in all hinesty you should carry it on,and maybe make contact with some  writers,and start building up story lines around them.
    Good work - well done.Please carry on..................
    CJ
    X
  • silverwhisper said on Jul 19, 2008....
    nicely done, SG! i wasn't sure what direction you were going to go w/ this but i like the results. :>

    ed
  • queenparanoia said on Jul 19, 2008....

    more...

    that's all i want more!!! this is so hot sensual girl!!! =)

  • ssmithford said on Jul 20, 2008....
    I enjoyed this.  Thank You!
  • SensualGirl said on Jul 20, 2008....
    007Hardone, firstly just let me say how much I like your username!! :-)  Thanks for the comment and for standing to attention. LOL!
     
    Cuppa, you and Pusscat are too kind!!! Thank you for saying I have talent, but in all honesty I dont think so, I just write what pops into my head.  Lately that has been sex pretty much all the time. LOL!!! (((hugs)))
     
    Ed, thank you and thanks for liking the results!!  If we do this again, I am going to aim to draw things out a bit more and give better descriptions.
     
    Queenie, so glad you liked this, but cant help feeling a little guilty at corrupting your mind like this, 'lil sister! (((hugs)))
     
    Ssmithford, thank you for stopping in here :-)
  • queenparanoia said on Jul 20, 2008....
    don't worry my mind is already corrupted for a long time... =)

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