well, since sis specifically requested an erotica writing exercise, i figured why not oblige? :D
so this time: i will describe a scene. write as much as you like of what happens next, minimum 100 words.
ready?
she shuddered at the feeling of his fingers as he langorously unbuttoned her blouse. from behind, the unmistakable shape of his hardness pressed into the cleft of her bottom through their clothes. she sighed happily, reveling in how her body responded to his touch, how alive her skin felt in the cool evening air as he slipped off her top.
he leaned in, nibbling at her neck, slipping down the side towards her shoulder, then towards the small of her back as he crouched behind her. this lazy, meandering pattern served only to stoke the ember of her desire into a roaring flame.
already she could feel her twin nubs of desire responding to what he was doing, becoming firm. she turned to face him, saw him still crouchin on the grass before, and smiled in a way both playful and wicked.
so what happens next? :>
please bear in mind the following (previously posted here):
1. post constructive, specific criticisms. a response of “i don’t like it” doesn’t say anything helpful. a response of “when you wrote [x], i felt this didn’t work b/c [reason: e.g., doesn’t sound like the character, contradicts something you wrote earlier]” is considerably more useful to the writer.
2. understand that criticisms you may receive are posted in good faith. we all have weak points in our writing. i’m not good sometimes at setting the scene, i tend to gloss over the locations b/c i’m more concerned w/ dialogue and characters. comments that help me shore up that weakness are things i really would appreciate.
3. post your piece on your own blog page, but post a comment here with a link to it when you post it.
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silverwhisper posted on Jul 17, 2008
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queenparanoia said on Jul 17, 2008....
i'll read this tomorrow... where i'm alone... ;-) -
polarheart said on Jul 17, 2008....
Ahemmm, I think I'll just go and wake up Sensual Girl. . .I know she wont be able to resist this little exercise! LOL! -
SensualGirl said on Jul 17, 2008....
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CreativeWoman said on Jul 17, 2008....
Here is my submission.
CW
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silverwhisper said on Jul 18, 2008....
sis: take your time!
polar: you do that! :>
SG: ah, i'm looking forward to reading that now!
CW: it's been a long time since you've participated in one of these, it's good to see you here! :>
and now, mine is finally up.
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queenparanoia said on Jul 19, 2008....
this was hot!!! i'll read creativewoman's and sensualgirl's... =) -
silverwhisper said on Jul 19, 2008....
bah, i think you should try your hand at writing one. :>
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queenparanoia said on Jul 19, 2008....
i ran out of erotica today... =) -
silverwhisper said on Jul 21, 2008....
to me that's usually a signal that it's time to write my own. :>
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