My heart holds your soul in adulation
My soul holds your heart in admiration
Together we become one
no possible separation
Craving insatiable dedication
No matter where
lose all concentration
My love for you is indescribable
you really have no inclination
In euphoria I dream of us
entangled together on white sands
The world disappears,
To only have eyes for you,
to follow all your
commands
Love struck beyond comprehension
Patience being held
aching for release of sexual tension
To revere the alluring angel before me
Angelic beauty
To give you pleasure endlessly
To hold you adoringly
whisper my love
for you unconditionally
Kissing your neck, kissing your lips softly
getting lost within
your eyes seductively
You’re my treasure
that I’ll adorn with affection and devotion
exploring and discovering
ways to give you unbelievable pleasure
Others being fools in letting you go unloved
Make you feel like a goddess undying ecstasy and forever loved
*Immortal* is our love
Eternal is our flame of desire
My angel sent from above
My heart has never soared higher
phoenix_paradigm posted on Jun 09, 2008
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Comments
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starchini said on Jun 09, 2008....
aww thats so sweet. I know didly squat about poetry so im no critique, but i liked it. Good Job -
phoenix_paradigm said on Jun 09, 2008....
just trying to put words to actions, when ur alone and miss that someone you picture what it would it be like to be in their presence...thats what i try to write, putting words of passion to help picture a moment.
i'm not a pro, i just write what i can and hope someone somewhere enjoyed it :)
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starchini said on Jun 09, 2008....
so who do u miss?
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