• starchini said on Jun 09, 2008....

  sexy...i myself have never had sex on the beach...i hear its over rated, what with all the sand in ur ass and vajayjay : >

• phoenix_paradigm said on Jun 09, 2008....

  could be, i wouldn't doubt it - this is just a fantasy tho, i haven't done it - perhaps it could be just as fun helping the other shower to get all the sand out, lol :) 

• starchini said on Jun 09, 2008....

  i have a feeling many toold and implements possible a douche would be involoved with removing sand fom a vagina.  I could only imagine the scrapes and microscopic tears, it would burn when u peed for months lol.  Id consider sex on the beach if there were many many big blankets around lol.

• phoenix_paradigm said on Jun 09, 2008....

  starchini: ur kind of a joy kill here on this one, lol. :p 

• starchini said on Jun 10, 2008....

  lol i know im sorry, im as down to earth as it gets : P

• Wish_Upon_A_Star said on Jun 11, 2008....

  it was a very well written poem, good imagery. If i might make a suggestion to this part
  "bodies entwined, sand everywhere
  hands on random body parts
  take control, pulling your hair
  begging for more"
  
  
  i think it would sound better with  'taking control, pulling your hair" the take made me stumble.
  
  and i'm sorry for the unsolicited advice - i'm on the college's literary journal and it's a habit now...
  
  
  

• starchini said on Jun 12, 2008....

  hehe, he oughtta smack u with a trout!  : P

• DaddysLittleSlut said on Jun 14, 2008....

  I have to admit that its way too many years ago for anything but romatic memories of sex on the beach.  I remember it was hot.  I remember sand in my clothes, shaking out my glittering bra and panties. I don't remember any pain just being in complete lust with that hot, surfer guy and having a crush on him for years after.  I would repeat his name...and think of him carrying me down the stairs toward the water in the dark of night.  Making out on some flimsy little blanket as he had his way with the drunken little girl he found at the party.  yea maybe i was too drunk to remember the problems but i still smile when i run his name through my head.
   
  Thanks for the poem and the for bringing back some sweet sensations,
  dls

• gingersoul said on Jun 15, 2008....

  Phoenix.....this brings me back so many memories.....:-)
  
  And its also well written. I like the build up of the erotic tension...like the waves against the shore..
  

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