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Poem #1:
 
Love is Passion.
Love is Pain.
One without the other,
It wouldn't be the same.
 
Love is Passion.
Love is Pain.
Don't know what to do,
I'm tired of this game.
 
Love is Passion.
Love is Pain.
Why can't two people
Just feel the same?
 
Love is Passion.
Love is Pain.
What do I do now?
I think I've gone insane.
 
Love is Passion.
Love is Pain.
Can't two hearts
Beat together again?
 
Love is Passion.
Love is Pain.
Can't think too clearly.
Losing the control I had gained.
 
Love is Passion.
Love is Pain.
Spinning out of control,
Sunny day turned to rain.
 
Love is Passion.
Love is Pain.
Why does there
Have to be so much pain?
 
Poem #2:
 
Can't you see what you do to me?
By your words and actions,
You are telling me things.
Things you won't say to me.
 
Can't you see what you do to me?
Just as I think I have an idea,
You put up the wall
And hide yourself from me.
 
Can't you see?
Can't you see?
What you do to me?
 
Can't you see?
Can't you see?
Open your eyes.
 
Can't you see?
Can't you see?
Open up inside.
 
What are you doing to me?
Why do you hurt me this way?
Confusing and accusing.
Blaming and shaming.
 
What are you doing to me?
Are trying to make me leave?
Just say it, don't hide it.
Tell me how you feel.
 
Can't you see?
Can't you see?
What you do to me?
 
Can't you see?
Can't you see?
Open your eyes.
 
Can't you see?
Can't you see?
Open up inside.
 
Tell me how you feel.
Tell me this ain't real.
This pain inside,
Too strong to hide.
 
Tell me what to do.
Tell me what to say.
I don't want
To have to turn away.
 
Tell me, Baby, please.
 
Can't you see?
Can't you see?
What you do to me?
 
Can't you see?
Can't you see?
Open your eyes.
 
Can't you see?
Can't you see?
Open up inside.
 
Can't you see?
Can't you see?
What you do to me?
 
Can't you see?
Can't you see?
Open your eyes.
 
Can't you see?
Can't you see?
Open up inside.
 
Baby, can't you see?
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Okay, so the second one kinda runs more like a song.  If I was at all instrumentally inclined, I might try to set that one to music, but I can't even play a recorder properly. :)  Well, don't be shy, please, tell me what you think.
 
 
 


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  • silverwhisper said on Apr 28, 2008....
    loria, that's a powerful pair of poems! i'm not usually good with reading poetry, but i do like them. :>

    ed

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Written and performed for the Trans Day of Remembrance....
I dedicate these words to poetzsoul, in hopes that her next 25 years are motivating....
for my love....
The darker it gets, the closer I'll be....
I had to. It has been brought up too often for me to resist....