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Note: In an hour's time, some friends, colleagues, my son and I are about to go on a long-dreamed-of trip to climb a high peak up to its famed summit. To use a tired cliche: All our bags are packed, we're ready to go.

I had wanted to post a new poem before I go. But, lacking time and the primal urge to write something new, I did the next logical (if shameless) thing: recycle an old post. I told you I'm a cheap recycler. If you're interested in the comments generated by this old post, click here.

P.S. The Youtube clip is Beethoven's Symphony No. 6 (Pastoral). See you next week, folks. Enjoy life to the fullest!






1


Most climbers are obsessed with summits.
Impatiently around the base camp they pace
And hurriedly trudge along well-worn ascent routes
To quickly reach the peaks of their euphoria
Where they pause -- to catch their breaths and images
And keep faithful score of their games and gains.

Then they rush back down,
Load their stuff on trucks and cars
Hurry home for dinner with the kids
And sleep with wives on soft silk beds.
Until they gather on the next weekend
For another scheduled conquest climb.

This is why, I have to admit,
I rarely do these summit treks.
It's neither right nor wrong, neither good nor bad.
It is simply too sacred, awesome and rare
To shape my mundane urges.

2

Ahh, yet my heart leaps with joy.
Since my cherished mountain yonder
Has assumed the shape of a lovely dormant maiden.
And I'll climb her today.
I need to climb her today.
And if she enfolds me into her misty embrace,
Then I would love to stay -- 'til I climb down someday
But only if she tires of me, because I'll never tire of her
Who refreshes me everyday with morning dewfall.

Since, you see, I'm a highland boy
And to me, a mountain is an intimate friend and lover
With desires and thoughts I'm drawn to explore.
So today I won't begin another quick conquest
But pursue and sustain a lifetime quest
And add more steps to these endless monologues
Of my restless legs seeking love's ascent.

3

Quietly now I scout her smooth gentle foothills.
My soles tickle her soles in a mutual massage.
Uphill I gaze to seek her easy relaxing trails
Skipping up and down the hollows and soft foliage
Of her shapely limbs that extend to the clouds.
Often I pause and rest and listen to
The songs of birds and cricket chirps
That carry my mountain lover's lilting laughter
Like the warble of a wildwood nymphet.

I push upward, and her ridges open up to better view.
Urging me on to caress her secrets further upstream.

Behold I see now a lovely valley
Hidden folds between virgin slopes
Of rainforest galleries and pine ridges above.
Wind-borne whiffs of conifer and wild lychees,
Limes and sweet sage from citrus groves
Offer me a perfumery of myriad aromas.

Gazing across my maiden's meadows
Her fragrant scent invites me to rest
I swoon in time with her soft rise and fall,
Sweet morning dew mixes with lover's sweat.
The rising sun says she's in vaporous heat
And urges me to quicken my steps
I climb further up and espy her mango groves
That offer ripe and succulent whispers on my tongue.

My taut muscles finally dig into her soft grass soil
My lusty breath blows into the shell of her ears
Lightning bolts urge my feverish climb
The looming rain joins the river thunder
And we drown in its soft swallowing noises.
I watch wood nymphs play among her rivulets,
Dripping waterfalls mix with her surging juices
She happily pours it out with a wanton smile
And I merrily drink with a lecherous grin.

I begin to tire but she pulls me further up.
My breathing's quicker and belabored now
My lungs about to burst, my heartbeats audible
Harsh and pounding against her farthest cliffs, where
Tiny hamlets dance in the primal drums of passion.

4

But mountain goddess smiles to say
I don't need to always seek her peaks and join her there
She can give me all the hours of the harvest moon
To roll and play around her steepest slopes
In a constant state of explosive joy.
We may reach it or not, today or next,
But her arrogant summit is always there
Ever victorious and gleaming in the sun.
We will lie satiated under its shadow til evening comes
We will gaze content at ebony heavens and feather clouds
And watch green foliage turn to peacock swirls before our eyes.

5

And as the endless clouds blanket us in mist and fog
My muscles stiffen again, the wanderlust stronger now
I seek the inner warmth of the mountain's folds
And enter her secret ritual caves
To perform the sloughing of my skin and offerings of flesh.

During this full September moon when the deer paw the earth.
He who comes from me is lusting to taste the freshness of pulsing flesh
Of virgin victim, a mountain nymph on a bed of ferns
His fangs will sink into willing venison, tangy and bittersweet
And this man-wolf will turn himself inside out
With a terrible growl, triumphant again tonight.



7:20 p.m. 25 Sept 2007
Offering for the harvest moon festival




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Comments

  • Fallyn said on Apr 05, 2008....
    i love this. thankyou.
  • queenparanoia said on Apr 05, 2008....
    happy trip moon!!! =)
  • gingersoul said on Apr 06, 2008....

    Moon......you know, i have already read this poem the first time you posted it .....but with the soundtrack of Beethoven i found it even more beautiful.......

    Hope your climbings adventure with your mountain mistress has been a good one and you can come back tired but energized.

    Naturally, you know what i am expecting from you, right?

    A loooooong post about your mountain love....lol.....no graphic allowed.... only poetry....:-) 

  • kelly said on Apr 06, 2008....
    Wow...  Being a mountain trekker myself I sooo want to know the name of the mountain!
  • sweetlife said on Apr 10, 2008....
    this is absolutely wonderful!
  • Me-Myself&I said on Apr 11, 2008....

    Aren't you done tickling her foothills yet? Or did the wood nymphs get ahold of you?

    Hope you are enjoying yourselves. Just wanted to say HI and i'm missing you. *smile* ~see ya

  • moonriver said on Apr 13, 2008....
    Hello, everyone. Back from the summit, and now that I'm fully rested (and also tied up a few loose ends), I'm back to regular blogging... I guess.

    fallyn -- To tell you frankly, I think Part 5 of this poem is misplaced. I've been thinking of deleting it. But since it showed my train of thought during those moments when I was trying to wrap up the poem, so I decided to keep it there. Thanks for the nice words...

    queenie -- My friend, you can't imagine how incredible this trip has been for me and my son, not to mention some long-time friends and colleagues. I'll try to fit in some time to write a few blogs about it.


  • moonriver said on Apr 13, 2008....
    ginger -- Long mountain-climbing posts forthcoming, dear lady... a few pics, maybe some poetry. I can't promise anything.

    Mountain mistress? Yup, maybe you could call her that (the summit we climbed, I mean). But I'd rather call her my long-forgotten mountain friend. I merely paid her a quick courtesy visit. Hope to have deeper interactions with her in the future.

    Beethoven's Sixth is one of my son's favorites. He always associates this symphony with mountains, forests, rivers, the setting sun, the deep blue night sky embedded with stars and the moon... sensual in an innocent way :-)

  • moonriver said on Apr 13, 2008....
    kelly -- Poems have so many layers of meanings, and mountains have so many names. This peak does have a very popular name, but I'm afraid I can't mention it right now, sorry... :-)

    sweetlife -- I'm glad you liked the poem. Hope you'd like my next blogs about climbing mountains. Thanks for dropping by.

    memyself -- Yup, my friend, her foothills were ticklish at times. But no wood nymph was able to succeed in getting a-hold of this wily mountain monkey. Hey, how are you these days? I hope you're fine and dandy. Thanks for the nice words!

  • rustydiamond said on Apr 14, 2008....
    Exellent writing moonriver. Never tried any poetry myself.
  • moonriver said on Apr 14, 2008....
    rusty -- If you ask me, poetry is like mountain-climbing. Everyone with two serviceable legs can do it. It's just a matter of practice, of familiarity with the terrain, of determination -- a matter of degree that can improve over time -- that imparts differences in quality. I suggest you try it when a certain mood hits; you'd be surprised at what you can do ... :-)
     
    Hey, thanks for dropping by, and nice to meet you here at Soulcast... :-)
     
  • kelly said on Apr 14, 2008....
    Oh, that is just not fair.  :-)
  • hotaka said on Apr 16, 2008....
    For most of us, the beginning of this poem is very true. It is not because we are in such a rush to climb and conquer and be back to our beds. It is simply because we don't have the time to linger and enjoy. When I climb I always feel torn because I want to spend time enjoying the forests and streams but if I do I know I won't make it to the upper ridges where I hope to see and photograph the light and landforms. On the way down I am usually running on a tight schedule to get back to the station or to return the rental car. What I have to do is chose where I want to spend my time enjoying and savouring the spledor of nature and get there as soon as possible then spend my time as leisurely as possible before hurrying back down. It is a shame but since I rarely have more than three days to go out and explore this is what I have to do.

    There are nights at home when the rain is falling or after a storm when the air smells fresh that I wish I were sleeping in my tent somewhere with the promise of waking up to nature's glory. Even in the rain I can find peace, as long as I am not soaking wet.

    I hope you had a great trip filled with all the rewards you hoped to aquire. I look forward to reading about your experiences. I know I will be envious.
  • moonriver said on Apr 17, 2008....
    kelly -- Ah, but we all know that life often isn't... ;-)

    hotaka -- I'm glad you posted this comment, my friend. Yes, we all have these practical limitations, and I can see your love of mountains would really make you tarry as long as possible.

    In the poem, I was (partly) fantasizing about certain times in my life when I had the option to stay for life among the indigenous people and friends living in those mountains... and indeed I did stay for years or months at a time, but that's another story.

    I did have a great trip. I would have wanted to stay for at least a week, too, but like you said, there are always the time constraints that our routine mundane lives demand.

    I had wanted to write and post an account of the climb today. But again, the limits of 24 hrs per day... tomorrow hopefully.

    Thanks for dropping by!


  • hotaka said on Apr 17, 2008....
    Then I hope I will have the chance to catch your post. I'd love to read your story.
  • moonriver said on Apr 17, 2008....
    hotaka -- Thank you. I'll post it by tomorrow noontime or mid-afternoon at the latest. We're in the same time zone I think, so hopefully that would be convenient for you too. :-)

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