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You are the night breeze that carries rare jasmine scent to a silent room.

You are the surging surf that speaks poetry of the sea to a deserted beach.

You are the sunset clouds that paint the colors of the sky on this empty scroll.

You are the cleansing flame that sears itself into this heart of frozen tears.

You are the sunburst glow that warms my life from day to day.

You are the air that I breathe. You are the fire in my heart.





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  • secretlife said on Apr 04, 2008....
    oh man moon, you know i'm a sucker for love poems!!!!
    this was beautiful!
  • Mamie said on Apr 04, 2008....
    I am lucky to know that feeling! Wonderful, beautiful and such a blessing....thanks for sharing. Mamie
  • biglove said on Apr 04, 2008....
    Moon ~ that is lovely...it gave me chills.
  • queenparanoia said on Apr 04, 2008....
    dude that was beautiful...
  • Me-Myself&I said on Apr 04, 2008....
    i agree with all of the above! thank you. ~see ya
  • PAPERBACKWRITER said on Apr 04, 2008....


    How are you moon?  I have been wondering where you are?

    I miss seeing your comments around. . .

    The poem reflects as always your passionate soul. . .

    paper ~
  • CreativeWoman said on Apr 04, 2008....
    Beautiful...as always.

    CW
  • wishyouwerehere said on Apr 04, 2008....
    So beautiful - thank you for sharing.
  • the_infernal_optimist said on Apr 04, 2008....
    Ohhh...that's gorgeous, moon.

    ~Infernal
  • wombat said on Apr 04, 2008....
    You are the sunset clouds that paint the colors of the sky on this empty scroll.
     

    Beautiful poetry!  And I enjoyed the piano music too, but wanted to drop my head down on the desk and take a nap...very soothing!

     


  • lfbno7 said on Apr 05, 2008....
    Me?
  • silverwhisper said on Apr 05, 2008....
    moon, that was lovely!

    i recognize this piece of music but can't quite place it, though: ?

    ed
  • GrapeKoolaid said on Apr 05, 2008....
    Well writ...  Very nice...

    ed:  This is Fantasie impromptu by Chopin in C# minor. 
  • silverwhisper said on Apr 05, 2008....
    i knew it sounded like chopin! thank you. :>

    ed
  • GrapeKoolaid said on Apr 05, 2008....
    Sure thing.  Chopin in the master at tickling the ivories.  Supposedly, he had tiny hands, though.  :)
  • silverwhisper said on Apr 05, 2008....
    that's surprising--i know he was a pianist and that's exceedingly unusual for a pianist.

    ed
  • GrapeKoolaid said on Apr 05, 2008....
    I guess if you look at his compositions, he has a lot of fast moves, but few places where the hand really has to stretch.  It's an exercise in manual dexterity. 

    I can't remember where I heard that, but I have.  
  • silverwhisper said on Apr 05, 2008....
    that's interesting--should you recall where, i'd appreciate a link.

    ed
  • gingersoul said on Apr 05, 2008....

    Ed........Grape remembers correctly...Chopin did have small hands....here osome info for you:

    <Span and power techniques do not rely on your handsize as such, though a genuinely small or very small hand will obviously curtail what repertoire you can tackle. (My sister has genuinely tiny hands so she could not really even think of tackling a Rachmaninoff concerto, but she even now still baffles me by how well she plays Brahms Rhapsodies and Intermezzi, not known for small hand friendliness...) Beyond natural span, the key lies in the internal flexibility of the hand, the development and indeed stretching of the connective tissues between the fingers individually, and between the thumb and first finger specifically, combined with tremendous suppleness in the wrist. Chopin knew this like no other -- his hands were very far from large -- as did both Liszt and Debussy>..

  • silverwhisper said on Apr 06, 2008....
    ah--thank you, GS. :>

    ed
  • beautifulbecuaseofhim said on Apr 06, 2008....

    Moon,

    You words paint such beautiful pictures in my mind...I like Mamie have been blessed to feel this kind of love and find your words mirro my thoughts.

    BBoH

  • moonriver said on Apr 17, 2008....
    to everyone -- Thank you all for your nice comments. Including that of Lfbno7. Hey, you. Yes yo.... lol.

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