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Darkness underneath
soft hands grasping at the air
I drink of her cup
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Hair soft but curly
my fingers brush by quickly
seeking her soft petals
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Haiku by Steve Mount

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  • moonriver said on Mar 23, 2008....
    I like these pieces. Evocative. Of what? You tell me. Lol.

  • Blank said on Mar 23, 2008....
    May be, this will answer-
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    Once upon a time, there was a female brain cell which, by mistake, happened to end up in a man's head.
    She looked around nervously, but it was all empty and quiet. "Hello?" she cried... but no answer. "Is there anyone here?"
    She cried a little louder, but still no answer....
    Now the female brain cell started to feel alone and scared and yelled: "HELLO, IS THERE ANYONE HERE?"
    Then she heard a voice from far, far away ...
    "Hello - we're all down here..."
  • moonriver said on Mar 23, 2008....
    Lol. This story is nice. But I like the two haiku better. They make me, shall we say, salivate. ;-)

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