My hollow soul hangs heavy on my naked frame.
I stare into the mirror not recognizing the image before me.
This mirror holds my picture yet not my soul.
Who am I? Where have I gone?
Is reality an attainable goal?
I feel lost in this cosmic parallel world much like hell.
There is a fist around my heart
squeezing tighter with each breathe I take.
I want to reach inside and rip it out, make the pain subside
Scream, scream louder, scream so loud the universe shakes.
Scream until someone hears me
Until my escape opens, until freedom comes...
I'mNotHungry posted on Mar 22, 2008
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moonriver said on Mar 22, 2008....
I understand your poem, both as a scream for help, and as literature. It would be so nice to discuss poetry with you in a relaxed manner.
But at this point, there is only one thing for you to do. Unlock that door of the room that you've turned into your own prison. Then go outside, even just for today.
It must be a nice Saturday morning there. Breathe fresh air, look at the sky, smell the ground. Feel yourself alive. And tell the demons to go to hell. And try to eat something.
After you are able to do that, then let's talk poetry.
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Mamie said on Mar 22, 2008....
hiya Hun, "H"for short, ok?....I hear you. Do you hear you? xoxoxo, M
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