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As children bring their broken toys
   With tears for us to mend,
I brought my borken dreams to God
    Because he was my friend.
 
But instead of leaving Him
    In peace to work alone
I hung around and tried to help
    With ways that were my own.
 
At last I snatched them back and cried,
   "How can You be so slow?"
"My child," He said, "what could I do?
    You never let them go."
 
                                                  ~Lauretta Burns


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  • wombat said on Mar 13, 2008....
    That's a very nice poem and it says alot in a few words!  Gives me things to think about that I need to be thinking of.
  • GrapeKoolaid said on Mar 13, 2008....
    I've never found it easy to tussle with the divine.  He's got quite the iron grip and he's way stronger than I am... 

    Thanks for the poem.  It was very nice...  :)
  • quietone said on Mar 13, 2008....
    wombie ~ yes it makes me think also.. I came across this in the new book I am reading.
  • quietone said on Mar 13, 2008....
    Grape ~ for sure stronger and wiser!  thanks for stopping by!!  :)
  • mobil said on Mar 13, 2008....
    We gotta let go don't we Quiet, what a great poem and post thanks for that.
  • Me-Myself&I said on Mar 13, 2008....
    very nice. thank you, i'll write it down in my notebook. have a good evening at work. take care ~see ya
  • quietone said on Mar 13, 2008....
    mobil ~ yes, this is why it is one of my favorites... to remind me that I have to "let go".  :)
  • quietone said on Mar 13, 2008....
    MeMy ~ Yes, I now have it in a file on my computer now too.  To remind me to let go... especially glad to let go of this cold I have!  :)
  • wombat said on Mar 13, 2008....
    Just saying hello to a friend--don't worry about PM's and all that.  Just wanted to say hello and hope you feel better soon.
  • polarheart said on Mar 14, 2008....
    Quiet, I so love this poem too. . .I wrote it down in my girly scrapbook when I was a young girl.  It spoke volumes to me then and still does today.
     
    Love Polar
  • skald said on Mar 14, 2008....
    Lovely and wise. 
  • quietone said on Mar 14, 2008....

    wombie ~ okay... no PMs.. haha I sent one anyway.. LOL

     

  • quietone said on Mar 14, 2008....
    polar ~ the first time I heard it was about 10 years ago... I so needed to hear it then.  It turned on a huge light for me.  It is still hard to do.. the "letting go"  but I am better at it.   I am glad you enjoyed reading it again.
  • quietone said on Mar 14, 2008....
    skald ~ yes it is.  :)
  • destinydiva said on Mar 14, 2008....
    I love this, and really needed to read it, thank you quiet :-)
    It kinda reminds me of the footprints in the sand I do love reading messages like this, they really speak to me :-) xx
  • queenparanoia said on Mar 15, 2008....
    love this poem.... really speaks out what i'm going through in this moment of my life... =)
  • quietone said on Mar 15, 2008....
    destiny ~ believe it or not I did answer you, but I guess SC ate it!  I am glad you liked it too. 
  • quietone said on Mar 15, 2008....
    queenie ~ yes it says a lot.  I am glad you liked the poem too.  I think at times we all have a hard time "letting go".
  • ydmort said on Mar 15, 2008....
    quietone: I have read this poem many times before.  It helps to read again to help me realize he still has it all under control.  Thanks for the reminder!!
  • quietone said on Mar 15, 2008....
    ydmort ~ you are welcome.. and you are right, it is a good reminder every now and again.

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It is harder to share pain than it is joy. Sometime with the help of friends and family, we endure our pains. But sometimes we have to stand alone. But if you maintain a postive outlook and endure cheerfully, we will find more company along the way....

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and...
Say Goodnight

Close your eyes
Under starlit skies...
I suppose, anyway, just quit looking at my coffee ... that'll get you into trouble and you don't want trouble....
uggghh...