• crybabylu said on Feb 18, 2008....

  I like this poem very much, Sean. Thank you for sharing.

• D6fer said on Feb 18, 2008....

  There has got to be a story behind that poem!

• GrapeKoolaid said on Feb 18, 2008....

  Dammit, now I'm all dizzy.....

• SeanRenaud said on Feb 18, 2008....

  1. No prob.  Had to get it off my chest anyway
   
  2. Yeah there is.
   
  3.  Sorry.

• GrapeKoolaid said on Feb 19, 2008....

  Please, it's I who should be sorry.  It was very well written.  It was rather flippant of me to jest at a topic that seems rather personal in nature. 
  
  Once again, my apologies. 
  

• SeanRenaud said on Feb 19, 2008....

  rofl.  Dont' be sorry, I actually took is as a compliment that my words caused a reaction.  Unfortunately infelction carries poorly over the net.

• GrapeKoolaid said on Feb 19, 2008....

  :) 
  
  Ever seen "High Anxiety" by Mel Brooks?  It's a spoof on Hitchcock's "Vertigo".  For obvious reasons, your poem reminded me of both films.  

• Carefully said on Feb 19, 2008....

  sounds like someone tried to turn you upside down all right.

• Zayda said on Feb 19, 2008....

  Sean--I really like the rhythm of the piece. I think it works every well with the subject. :)

• Tolerance said on Feb 19, 2008....

  It sounds like a song I've heard before. A good song. That must mean this is a good piece.

• truthsayer said on Feb 19, 2008....

  I think that sounds like things often are SeanR.  I like the poem.  I had the flu recently.  I rarely (if ever) get inner ear problems.  But for about a week after the fever broke...the floor, the walls, the ceiling...looked like I lived in a Tilt-A-Whirl.
   
  I still had things to do and people to take care of.  So, I had to trust some built in 'inner navigation' mechanism that I could only hope, trust, and have some faith ; ) that I had.  It was really weird.  But it worked.  Even in Wal-Mart!!! 
   
  I like the poem because you were able to articulate something that lots of people wouldn't be willing to say...even if they thought it was true for them too.
   
  It's the first thing I have seen from you in a while.  I may have been dizzy, but I still kept checking in : )
   
  Thank you for sharing that with us.  I am so proud of you.
   
  Your friend,
   
  truthsayer  

• bluegum said on Feb 20, 2008....

  sean it was ok ,some people can write and some ca'nt, i ca'nt it's a fact of life 
  maybe you can do one on 'its a fact of life '?only if you want too mate.

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