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As I write these words, my boyfriend sits on the couch, watching a movie.  I never really thought I would fall in love with him.  Or that I am, but it's true.
 
It has happened to me.  I've fallen hard and true.  And this time I'm really scared because he has the upper hand.  I don't believe anyone could love me the way he does and that terrifies me.
 
I love him more and more.  I'd only read about what I'm living with him in books and movies.
 
We've been going strong and stronger since June 24th, 2006. 
The following poem is about him... us... How he makes me want to be a better person and that as long as I have him, for however long that might be.  I will have been blessed, simply because he was a part of me.
 
 
The night unveiled
The morning sun
There is nowhere
to hide
No lies are told

As the day breaks
the truth be told
Another sleepless night
Another dance
in the devil's arms

Wasted and wounded
In your arms
I heal
in your eyes
I feel

Time stops
as the hours go by

The day fades
Another sunday
wasted away

It should be
wrong
It should be
bad
Yet it feels
so good
It feels
so right
What can I do?
You make debauchery
look so damn good


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  • evil_twin said on Jan 15, 2008....
    That was a nice poem! I can relate to being scared knowing someone loves you that much. I feel like that sometimes too. My life is like a fairytale to some people and it's frightening to have something so perfect because I'm so afraid I'll screw it up.

    June 24th is my birthday :-) Though, not 2006 because I'm a little older than that :-P

    -evil_twin LA
  • WriterTash80 said on Jan 15, 2008....
    Thank you Evil_Twin, you really do seem like someone I have stuff in common with... I came across this StumbledUpon thing and made myself a profile... check it out... 
     
     
    Have you heard of it?  And what is Flicker??
  • travelr712 said on Jan 15, 2008....
    nice poem writer. i happen to be a big fan of wasted sundays myself :-)
  • evil_twin said on Jan 15, 2008....
    This is Flickr. It's an online photo album service. It's just a place to upload your pictures you want to share with people. For a long time it was the only picture host that Soulcast allowed, so most people here use it. But you can also use Photobucket.com too. It's the same sort of thing.

    I looked at your Stumbleupon profile too! I might need to make me one of those....

    -evil_twin LA

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