Roe posted on Jan 08, 2008
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Beautiful brown slanted to perfection
I look beyond and see the pain and love it has endured
It tells the story of hurt brought on by trust
of past lives lost inside but has shaped the exterior
I see the hope of better days in grays and blue
envy in green and fear in all
Questions and confrontation and hate that chills the heart
Dark as night but trusting and strong
hunger of many seen through one
sickness and faith when I sit there and stare
black, white, yellow all have a pair
it has seen the beauty of a rose the magnificent skies
The sun’s brightening light as well as the moon light sky
I have seen it glisten with pleasure overcome with passion
Focused on an art that has become it’s obsession
The windows to the soul from the young to the old
you’ve seen it all the best stories are told
through your eyes
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phoeby said on Jan 08, 2008....
you're writing is really heart-felt and beautiful. It's like so much of yourself comes through your writing.love Phoeby -
davidstar said on Jan 09, 2008....
This is some of the best writing I have ever read. -
GracefullyGrowing said on Jan 09, 2008....
VERY nice!~Grace~ -
uniquely-ironic said on Jan 09, 2008....
very nice. I too believe our eyes tell the story of what's really inside. -
fearing said on Jan 09, 2008....
Beautiful Roe! Thanks for sharing it with us. -
wombat said on Jan 09, 2008....
Nice work! Welcome to SC, Roe. -
wombat said on Jan 09, 2008....
I forgot what I was going to say! That I liked your bio about the lost ship.... -
crybabylu said on Jan 09, 2008....
One word discribes this.....BEAUTIFUL!
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fearing said on Jan 09, 2008....
Cool Roe - you made the SC Front Page! Good for you! -
gingersoul said on Jan 09, 2008....
Roe....it seems you and i have a special thing about eyes...:-)
I like your poem.......if you like, read mine HERE.
And welcome to Soulcast.
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queenparanoia said on Jan 09, 2008....
nice...
i love this!!! =)
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wakingharmony said on Jan 11, 2008....
Nice.... I was going to say this reminded me of Gingersoul -
crybabylu said on Jan 11, 2008....
Toe, this was made me think I was reading maya angelo. -
crybabylu said on Jan 11, 2008....
Sorry, I hit the T key instead of the R
I meant to say Roe. I have worn off some of my letters from my keyboard.
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