• hottips4u said on Jan 08, 2008....

  Hiya C, atleast your consistant. Glad to see things are pretty much the norm here.

  Just stopped by to say hiya's.

  Jessi.

• wild-ting said on Jan 08, 2008....

  Hot! HOT! HOT!!!
  
  A man who can turn me on with just the right words... short, sexy and to the point. I love it exhibit_c.
  
  -WT
  

• secretlife said on Jan 08, 2008....

  wow!
  i loved this!

• queenparanoia said on Jan 09, 2008....

  nice...

  i love this stye of writing... =)

• exhibit_c said on Jan 09, 2008....

  I think it's interesting that the ladies seem to like it despite the language that is so aggressive male-on-female.

• cakebottom said on Jan 09, 2008....

  I quite liked this until the very end.  You lost me at:
  I'll ...,
  
  I
  fucked
  you!
  
  I thought it could have benefited from a dominating finale, in much the same style as the rest of it.  You'd be surprised how many ladies like such male-on-female aggressive language--I think there's a part of a lot of us that just want to get down to the fucking basics of fucking.  Fuck all the flowery language about her lips, soft as roses.  A lot of the time, I just want to be fucked.  Plain and simple (hard, too;)). 
  Though the flowery stuff has a place too.
  
  Great work as usual, exhibit_c
  

• in_bocca_al_lupo3 said on Jan 10, 2008....

  I second wild-ting's opinion.
   
  Ha I loved the ending, too.
   
  I'm subscribing, I'm liking the work I've read so far.

• hotnsexy said on Jan 24, 2008....

  f#Ck yeah! i like your sh!T!
  thats how i effin want it ;)
  

• wild-ting said on Apr 23, 2008....

  I just stopped back to enjoy one of my favorite writings from you e_c.
  
  hotnsexy has quite a way with words as well  lol lol...very raw. But that's the way they like it  ;-)
  
  -WT
  

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