open the gate
to a heart conflicted, and
ripped by the twisted barbed wire
that entwines around the core
of who it is.
rusted wounds writhe
into weathered deformity
Comments
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LloydTheBarber said on Dec 07, 2007....
Hey luci,
Not only did i read your poem. I felt it too. I looked you up some time back, and I found that all of your blogs had been cleared out. I dont know where ya went, but I'm glad youre back.
PHIL (Lloyd is just my super hero name)
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luci-fur said on Dec 07, 2007....
hey there Phil. yeah, i have my moments where i clean up, tidy up. need to remove myself from .. whatever and whoever and... i dont know.i read your post also a week or so ago. Glad you've popped by and thanks.Luci. -
silverwhisper said on Dec 07, 2007....
luci, i like the tone of this--there's a sense of creeping realization that i thought worked really well here.
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luci-fur said on Dec 08, 2007....
hi yeahh not sure. i just write how i feel at the time. if it's light with gleams of hope and positivity, that's normally just a coincidence. sometimes a reflection of the hope i feel inside but mostly when i write here it's not. Mostly when i write here it's from a perspective of pain and gloom because that is how i'm feeling. and i know this is one of the only places i can get away with writing how i truly feel rather than sugarcoating it to make others' feel more comfortable.luci.
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